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Cedric B

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  1. Horsefulness says :

     Dear Cedric,
     
     thank you for the adjustments. I think the finest one is the most beautiful. what we do not like is that the women looks a bit like a fashion model.
     We have another designer (muis op tafel) that provided something that is also our taste.
     I think you and her give the best designs.
     Could you show us something different, a new idea? We don't want to pin ourselves to just one idea.

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  1. Description by designer Cedric B:

     Thx for your quick feedback.
     This one shows what you mentioned in your commentary.
     Concerning the hoof, it would be less aesthetic to feature it in the name than the iron wich, i think, won't suggest that your company promote it.

  2. Horsefulness says :

     It's well done, the horse is good and the woman is good but in the position the woman is now, the horse is pushing her. Better is that the horse is around her, so she is positioned more backwards.
     But, we are very curious what your other ideas would be... What we like a lot is a logo with a lot of movement in the drawing, like the examples we gave (pictures). It would be great if you could do something with that...
     A logo which exists out of a contour, filled with a colour is not what we like the most.
     so we are very curious if you could do something with more lines or more movements in the drawing itself.
     We hope you understand what we mean, English is not our motherlanguage, so sometimes a bit hard to explain what we mean...
     Sorry for that!
     

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  1. Description by designer Cedric B:

     Hi,
     The centaur suggests the connection between a horse and a woman.
     The dancing woman suggests liberty and body language.

  2. Horsefulness says :

     Hello,
     
     we can see you were thinking a bit further. The logo has style and we like the O resembling a iron, although it would be better to have a hoof instead of an iron because we want horses to be barefoot.
     
     The idea of the centaur is nice, but with that idea we miss the head of a horse. The element of dance is good.
     Maybe you can do something with a horse dancing around a women. The posture of the horse is very important. In this case the posture could be a pirouette. We will see to provide an example of what we mean.
     
     This is a example of a horse around a women http://mindful-horsemanship.s3.amazonaws.com/Los cirkelen 1.jpg
     
     this is an example of a horse in a good posture (piroutte)
     http://mindful-horsemanship.s3.amazonaws.com/logo los cirkelen.jpg
     
     The women should look very natural and with loose hair.
     
     Hope this helps. Let us know if u need more feedback
     

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