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Thanks for rating!

Thanks! I'm very exited!

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Thanks again for your efforts. I think I should give some more guidance if it comes to my preferred type of object. What I'm looking for is an image, which is less ‘rational’, computerlike, or 'clinical' than the ones you have proposed so far, but which shows more emotion, optimism (warmth), strength and positivity. This can be a very simple, (self-) drawn image, such as that of a little smily on a finger, angel wings, a happy doll reaching or stepping up to a next level, etc. A universal, touching symbol that people can relate to. Be creative! I’ll try to look for an example and upload that as an attachment. I’ll send you a message once it’s up.

Oka thanks. A little input is very welcome ;-)

I don't see the new attachment yet, but I'll keep checking.

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Much better! I like the overall appearance, but still can't identify with the visual (object). Maybe you can also try to spread the spacing between the letters used for "Whole" and "New" a bit more

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Thanks again for your proposal! Looking at both designs, here's my feedback: I actually give preference to a design that is more similar to your first proposal, since I really liked the combination of the black and green shades and the optimism and positivity that it reflects. I guess that could also be attained by just using black letters, but I don't get that sense from design 2. I like the font of "Whole New" as used in your 2nd proposal, but I’m not a big fan of the font used for "You", and prefer a font more similar to the one used in design 1. I can't relate to the object unfortunately. As for the pay-off, seeing it includes in the logo makes me realise it's actually quite long (thanks for including this though!). I guess we could try to leave it out, and see what happens to the logo.

Last addition: Preference goes to the horizontal shape of logo 1, vs. the vertical (square) shape of logo 2

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Thanks for rating. I'd like to hear feedback so I can improve my design. Kind regards

Hi and thanks for your submission! I like the combination of two different fonts and the mix of italicised and regular fonts, although I have a preference for different type of fonts (more similar like the example fonts I included in the attachment). My preference goes to a white background with black letters, as in the top example. I also like the combination and use of the different colors in your proposal. The lotus flower feels a bit spiritual, and I prefer a symbol which radiates this less. As for the tagline, please use the sentence used in my briefing: “Food for thought for a healthy, energized and thriving life” instead of the "my personal journey", since the blog will reflect on much more than just that. Thanks!