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Bonsoir,

Nous avons réouvert le concours car nous avons eu beaucoup de travail et pas le temps gérer les retours pour les designers la 1ère fois.

Votre logo nous a plu mais quelques modifications sont nécessaires :

1. Faire une proposition de logo à l'horizontale. Ce sera la version la plus utilisée bien que la version verticale compte aussi.

2. Peut-on rajouter l'idée d'une ampoule en stylisant la serrure ? Cela ferait moins premier degré et ajouterait une signification supplémentaire.

3. Certains ont trouvé que les bulles ne s'échappaient pas assez pour faire penser à des projets qui se libèrent, comme c'est notre volonté première.

4. Peut-on personnaliser un peu plus la typographie ? En intégrant l'illustration dedans ou en changeant la police de caractère peut-être ?

Merci pour ces premières modifications. Nous vous tiendrons informé.

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Good evening,

We reopened the contest because we had a lot of work and no time managing the returns for the designers the 1st time.

Your logo pleased us but some modifications are necessary:

1. Make a logo proposal horizontally. This will be the most used version although the vertical version also counts.

2. Can we add the idea of a bulb by stylizing the lock? This would make less first degree and add extra meaning.

3. Some have found that the bubbles do not escape enough to think of projects that are released, as is our first wish.

4. Can we customize the typography a bit more? By embedding the artwork in or changing the font maybe?

Thank you for these first changes. We will keep you informed.

Dear, thank you very much for your comment. I will work on your suggestions and set up to look.
Greetings

Dear, I worked on your suggestions. I make a logo horizontally. I stylizing the lock to also be bulb, I make to bubbles more escape and for font i use Roboto and add cable on letter i. What do you think of my new proposal? Do you have any suggestion to improve my work?
Greetings

Hello tennisloool and thanks for your new suggestion! Here are our remarks :

1. Bubbles are better now.

2. We don't like very much the power outlet that comes out of the letter I. It's less modern. Perhaps you can work more on the font instead of add another illustration ?

3. Could you stylize the bulb in another way ? For example, instead of the bold thread inside the bulb, we can imagine you just put 2 or 3 stylised line for example to look more like it's shining inside you know, and make them thin, that shouldn't be the first image people see.

4. Can you try to put the circle at the beginning of Okimo just for seeing how it looks like ? But it's important we still understand the entire word is Okimo and not just Kimo, so I don't know if it will render well, it's up to you.

Have a good weekend

Dear, , thank you very much for your suggestions.
In the first two proposal I make new proposal for bulb. In the third proposal I use your suggestions 2 stylised line that shining inside. I used other fonts without illustration. I also put logo in Okimo.
Do you have any suggestions?
Have a good weekend also