It all started with an idea...

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Now with more black in the main drawing.

I also put some cells in the cutted pieces in the first drawing.

Once more the front of the data sheet.
Now with the updated illustration of the cutted cells.

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the drawing above is already much better. It can probably be improved a little bit. It is important that we understand the we are talking about solar panels of different shapes.

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brilliant. The idea of the color cells at the bottom. This is exactly what we were expecting.

the main drawing with the cut pieces of solar panels assembled together is very good. But it would look even better if if would be slightly darker (more black). As you have done, it is very good that we can still distingish the cells inside each solar panel. May be the contrast could be a bit softer. For sure, it is the best drawing that we have seen.

Better drawing first picture on frontside

Yes, it looks quite good.

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Font should be "Gill Sans". I forgot to say.

with the link here below; you have access to an application that shows different cell colors (blue, green, black, etc); Those are the different colors possibilities to build a solar panels. In the current version of your document, the cells are black. It is the default color. However, the customer has the possibility to ask a different color.

It would be nice to find a place on your document to display those color possibilities, so the customer would understand that he has the choice.

If you could display somewhere in the document, in a nice layout, the diffirent cells, it would be nice. It would also make the document a little bit more attractive.

http://www.issol.eu/custo/index.php

If you click on a colored cell. It becomes bigger. Then you can "save as" and use it in your doc.

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Font should be "Gill Sans". I forgot to say. it would be nice to have better text alignement.

Maybe you want to do something with this picture also. But it needs to be edited to make brighter, focus on the roof because the it's not very visible.

https://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/PmJnqK2xF5G1dfo5pgJPxkIoN_2iqZAkgdj5xmaLu4g?feat=directlink

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what you have done, is not bad at all.
However, if you could make the drawing on the fist page (roof with cut solar panels) look better, more professional.

Also, I have created a new picasaweb link with 1 or 2 pictures that would be nice to integrate in the product datasheet. The are are very grey. Would be nice to edit them so, they look better.

Thanks

I translated the text with OCR.
Not shure about the first picture, it is very blurry and hard to see how it is drawn. The picture of the building is also not a high quality image in basic.