It all started with an idea...

hi Vera,
I've now made the subtext as big as the title. Is this better?

Henry

perfect. I am really happy. Have a nice weekend!

Thanks :)
Nice weekend!

Henry

Hi Vera,

You mean like this?

Henry

yes just bigger (subtitle) like in your other drafts! the pink in my homepage is a little darker pink, more reddish than purple do you have that? Is the font color the same as the bag? Vera

Well, it is even bigger than the other. If you look at where the text ends. I did copy the color from your site and the subtext color is the same as the bag.
If you click on the image, you'll see a better version.

Henry

yes, but it won't be possible to read because if you look at my homepage you see the size that is for the logo.

Hi,
I've made the text in Arial and the subtext in Benguian. The other fonts were not so useful in my oppinion.

Hope you mean it like this.

Henry

Hi Henry, yes you are right these are the best fonts. But the subtitle has to be as big as in the other drafts otherwise it is hard to read. Thanks! Vera

How would the subtitle look in pink?

Hi Vera.
I've made the changes.

Henry

Hi Henry, the logo is nice and perfect. I was just thinking about the different fonts in the logo and in my homepage. I have the fonts of my homepage, I could send it to you?

Hi Vera,
Thanks. I will change the font, if you can email it to me.

Henry

Hi Vera,
I think you mean it like this.

Henry

yes. I will think about it for a few days and will let you know the final design :) thanks

Thanks :) I will wait for your answer.

Henry

Hi Henry. I decided for a shop theme now. Please go to my page (www.bethefirst.de) there you see the colour of the fonts, can you use the same colours in the draft?
And please remove the "20%" on the bag. Also no bold letters.
Thanks a lot!!
Vera

Hi Vera,

I had the subtitle centered under the woman. Now i've centered it under bethefirst. I've removed the ribbon.
Hope you like it

Henry

Hey Henry, yes it looks much better without the ribbon, good job. this is 95% :-)
2 little things about the font: maybe we can try to make the "be" and the "first" only a little bold, not so much as in the first draft. And I prefer the subtitle to be to the left side.
Thank you for making all these changes!
Vera

Hi Vera,

I've made the changes.
Hope you mean it like this.

Henry

Hi Henry, yeah looks good! but is the titel under bethefirst.de centered? doesn't look like it. And just to see can you remove the band/ribbon?
thanks!

Here is the black version.
If it is not good enough, I can add a white outline.

Henry

Hi Vera,

Here it is again.

Gr. Henry